Notice of absence from Caring dove
Taking a break from this site
Taking a break from this site
A dove travels in the soft sky
in the blue comfortable colours
that she can so often be used to in her days
it reminds her of the ocean that sometimes smiles below her two tender wings
a place that shines by a golden beach
yet it’s a place she’s never really felt
as she doesn’t know how to safely swim
just like the red Robin with little friendly feet
both birds meant to fly the sky
through the blues and sometimes greys
past talkative trees
maybe both wonder what it would be like to travel like a boat on waters
how it feels to feel something else touching their little feet and maybe even their wings too
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just thought of two words ‘ dove ‘ snd Robin ‘ used this to write my poem
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Comments3
Here the proximity of the word wander and wonder interchange leaving one to wonder and wander. A most interesting take on these birds of also a different type but also related.
Thankyou very much ) just realised I meant to write the word ‘ wonder ‘ not ‘ wander ‘ .
Glad you liked my poem
A lovely write, a sense of calm in the writing, enjoyed the read
Thankyou very much 🙂
You are very welcome
Wow, very beautiful. A beautiful image the message the perspectives. The soft details. Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings
Thankyou very much, for the kind words on my poem .. nice to know that it was liked ))
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