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Thank you
The Sun has returned
Thank you
The Sun has returned
Born in a dream.
You should forever cherish the day they are born.
The day you know your heart has finally been won.
You fall in love with the bundle of pure innocence.
Just natural joy, not yet harmed by life’s pretence
Squeeze them, hug them protect them from all harm.
Ensure the road they travel, is always safe and calm.
Help them achieve what you could only ever dream.
Show them that love and care you will always feed.
So, hold on tight and never let the opportunity go.
Feel the love they give as it just grows and grows.
Nataiella
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Lovely writing .. very important to feel ‘ loved
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I truly can feel this unconditional love. I hope you make them aware too. 🌹
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Couldn't agree more with each of my four I rejoiced and still rejoice. A lovely poem that should strike the heart of any parent. Most lovely
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For me this iabout a new born baby. Impossible not to cherish them.A beautiful poem
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This poem evokes both the warmth of immediate connection and the enduring responsibility to guide, care, and inspire, highlighting the transformative nature of love as it blooms and strengthens with time.
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Love this, Nataiella. Beautiful both in form and in message. Wonderfully done!🌹👏
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You are most welcome, dear friend!
Superb
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So very true Tobani, they are new angels in our lives.
Andy
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I truly hope they can provide the opportunity for the child to complete their life during which they are allowed to reach their full potential
As every child is entitled to, thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
But if the material circumstances aren't right, perhaps there should not be a birth.
I understand and appreciate both the piece and it's sentiments, but.....
I agree with that especially in today's world, if you cannot afford something,do not have it, but all the money in the world doesnt make you a good parent, if you cannot love unconditionally, nurture and care, then equally dont have children .
Agreed. To make it absolutely clear, if living in desperate poverty, war or famine, just don't bring another human into the world,
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