Brrm Brrm!
This is me! I told her.
The Chinese girl burst out laughing
and pleads insanity.
I'd like to show you
the tenderness of a child
behind
the Tasmanian devil.
Don't ever believe
not even my word.
I am what I do
and I don't say
if you saw me cry
the end of my child
with him in my hand
and in the other
the tail of my executioner
dragging me with your power
I understood my blood
the great Karma shakes me
pride of my little fire
beats of eternal love.
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Author:
Pari4 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: After dinner and laughter I conceal a text in feelings Daughter of the eternal heartbeat.
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Comments5
They say inside every devil there is a heart that is crying out for love, it is just many do not know how to recieve it so cannot give it, sorry I waffle!!, enjoyed the read, nicely written
I agree, sir. This devil is the father of a little princess. He's apparently coming to shake up the universe as we know it. He may be working on that aspect. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts. Best regards.
You are very welcome
Filled with diametrically opposed elements that unite in one way or another. Well done
Well, I'm glad you see it that way and that you liked it too. Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your words of encouragement. Best regards.
Your words paint raw emotion with striking contrasts—both tender and fierce. A hauntingly beautiful dance of vulnerability and strength.
Wow, well, my friend, I'm so glad you found it that way. Your kindness in sharing your impressions is incredibly encouraging and flattering. Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and leave your message. Best regards.
A wonderful, very deeply reflective write, not uncommon for you my friend. Which is why I find a home in what you write. Much, much appreciative of you and all you share! Glad our paths have crossed. 🌹👏
Wow, well, my friend, I'm also happy to meet such kind and caring people. Despite my many flaws and shortcomings, they treat me as an equal, and those events are what stop the stars from admiring these gestures. Thank you so much, as always, for taking the time to stop by and read. Best regards!
You are most welcome!
scary and powerful..good one
Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your sincere words. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Best regards.
always welcome
keep them coming
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