Who shall notice the absence of a star when there are millions of them sparkling in the sky.
I saw you walking towards me on a rainy day,
With an umbrella hovering above your head keeping the drops away.
I thought you might ask me to join you on that dull day,
Because I was the one without an umbrella on that slippery way.
Your head was facing down,
Looking at your own steps throughout the way.
And I asked myself, is she doing that to keep her looks away,
Or is she being too cautious, not to slip and fall along the way.
I could see your eyes,
Through that torn veil of hairs.
And I wanted to shout out to the world,
How beautiful you were.
Even the sun and the moon would go dull,
Just by the sight of that glowing face,
And I would give up my life,
Just to get a look at you, every day.
I would march through the gates of hell even for a dare,
If lucifer told me, that you my love is being held there.
I would relive the tortures of hell for you babe,
But are you sure you will love me without fail.
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Author:
Nocturnal Soul (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments2
A wistful love poem that seems a daydream and rambling thoughts that go through many of our heads as we observe another that catches our attention. Most lovley
I was smiling while reading your comment brother, this same thought went through my mind while writing this poem.
Know what you mean. Good one.
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