One Beneficial to Aten

Eugene S.

On the sands of the past

blow notes that ever last

awaiting words from the One who has spoken.

 

On his words, we would not feed

and paid heed to our own greed.

We forsook all of the ways of the Aten.

 

For he was the one, the lonely one

that gave us light from the sun

to feed the gardens we do all walk in.

 

I took you name, Akhen Aten,

Spread your words, sang them often.

My oath to you, on notes so true, flow through time unbroken. 

  • Author: Eugene S. (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 5th, 2025 09:26
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  • sorenbarrett

    Amenhotep IV who tried to erase the other gods and after his death his name erased from all monuments. A great try but no cigar. On the other hand this poem was a great write bringing back memories of history past. Most lovely



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