LOVE DYING

nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

Love in
Deathly throes
A blanket cast
Over final blows
A kiss
From distance
Never reaching
Broken heart is preaching.

Castle remnants
Battle lost
Half awakened eyes
To count the cost
Body to stretch
Shake from 
Its length
Emotion cast.
Like garbage
Spent.

Waters ripple
A moving beast
Upon the backs of men
In search of peace
Love in
Deathly throes
A blanket cast
Loves final blows.

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Loved the constant flow of metaphors in this poem of the chapters of love. Well done

  • Tony36

    Excellent write

  • Damaso

    Totally caught up in these lines, incredible! Thanks so much for sharing! Best regards

  • Hollow Enigma

    great great great poem. love to have fun reading this rhythm. though dont assume to know, but I'm feeling an over arching comparison of no matter it be power you feel from love, or the power from a might castle. It all falls down.



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