first
it comes as a whisper
a warning from the ether
don't take it too far, you know not what you've cast
then anger is what you meet
carmine faces, full of hate
they tear it down so fast, it could never last
"and like pharoah's tribe
they'll be drowned in the tide
and like goliath, they'll be conquered" ~ Bob Dylan
a martyr you've come to be
if only the mass could see
your whispers from the ether might be heard at
last
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Author:
Eugene S. (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
A developing treatise on Akhenaten or Amenhotep IV. Interesting subject that seems to be connected to everything.
Almost mystical in its presentation it calls on biblical imagery as well as Egyptian. I speaks softly and whispers
An interesting write with biblical imagery, a sense of we are pushing to far and soon we will all pay the price, nicely expressed and written
Excellent write
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