Like a disappearing lake
In these Alpine hills
I lie down flat and still
Oh to be moved by a mountain!
Face to face, with my free will
-Al
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Author:
Alan R (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: July 6th, 2025 11:39
- Category: Nature
- Views: 18
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Poetic Licence, RSM0812
Comments3
Short but powerful it speaks to being alone in making our choices and the beauty of it and all that surrounds it. A fave
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Wonderful write, making our choices for our selves and enjoying the beauty that will follow, enjoyed the read
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You are very welcome
Mountains are majestic for sure. As is your poem. Great job.
Thanks a lot, glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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