Was it Justified

MrNobody40

A second passes

And time slows

My mind has been drawn

Like ink on a canvas

On display and open

I'm fighting every memory of you

Every moment

And every minute that passes

Could have been a hundred

Or a thousand for all I know

I feel sick and senseless

My resignation is my death

And my deathbed every word I speak

Was I lost or just lonely

And was It justified

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sorenbarrett July 6th, 2025 17:39
I foresee the coming of a bad relationship in this poem. The portent is ill. Nicely written
Poetic Licence July 6th, 2025 23:59
The end of a bad relationship left wandering was it all their fault and was the behaviour justified, nicely expressed and written

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