Her sky was burning crashing down around her there was fire in the sky it burned so brightly she could not see that her whole entire world was gone she lost her breath laying on ground tears began to fall down her face washing some of the darkness away those tears fell and fell until the fire was out and she found her breath with her last bit of strength she stood up leaving a pile of pain she walked away letting him go.
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jennifer sanders (
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Sad and loss often is. This poem presents a person in the trauma of loss and leaves her there unresolved. Nicely written
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A touching write over the pain suffered at the loss of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
Love it
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