Grace and Dignity.
When the gates to eternal peace and freedom
are unlocked.
Walk through them with
Honesty, Grace and Dignity.
Unlike the way you lived
Your life.
Because it is way more than
You deserve.
Tobani June 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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This poem is full of contradictions that boggle the mind. Unlocking something eternally locked and how do you lock up freedom? How does one walk through with honesty, grace, and dignity when one has not lived that way, especially with it being more than one deserves. This sounds like political claptrap before an election where all is promised and nothing given, straddling a fence as the best defense. A fun read and well designed a fave Oh by the way Tobani are you running for office?
According to your feedback I am now qualified to stand for office, so will have to consider it!!!, enjoy the rest of your day
This poem expresses a harsh truth.None of us deserve eternal peace and freedom.But that is the tough facts of life.Made me think
Thank you, enjoy the rest of your day
Thank you so much for sharing your words. They flow like healing water washing away the wounds. It's always a pleasure to stop by and read. Best regards.
Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day
BRAVO
Thank you
Sometimes some things just need to be said & or written down .. I prefer the dual approach .. Well poemed my friend .. Neville
Thank you, very much appreciated
Your words cut deep, but true grace rises above bitterness. Perhaps peace begins when we release the need to wound.
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated
yes indeed - i agree with you in some cases; in others where clowns play with people's lives, i don't...
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated
always welcome. .take care...
You too
Wonderful words Tobani, that peace and freedom awaits us all.
Andy
Thank you
A-fucking-men. That is all that I can say to this. THIS...right here...is all one needs to know. They get this right, they'll be alright! Well done, my dear friend. Well done! A major standing ovation and fave. Pulling out the brolly now, in case the heavens open up to agree! 😂
Thank you i am glad you appreciated it, its always interesting to see how people interpret things, enjoy the rest of your day
You are welcome. You too, mate!
On another note and another read through, the opening to this very much reminds me of good ol' William Blake: "When the doors of perception are finally cleansed man will see things as they truly are: Infinite." Again. well done!
Thank you for your kind feedback, always appreciated
You are most welcome.
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