Sorry
Problems
I can't afford
A walking
Talking bomb
Staying calm
Is my top
Probably my only choice
An Atomic boomerang
Eye for death
Details in the paper work
No ability
To
Think
Feel
Act
Clearly
Watch for egg shells
Watch the smoke
One spark
Is all it takes
When you're
Swimming In Gasoline
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Author:
Anthony Hanible (
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- Published: July 9th, 2025 11:50
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments4
Don't mention that had it happen to me. Not a pleasant experience. A poem that evokes feelings of trepidation nicely done.
A nicely expressed write of the feeling of being right on the edge, one move and it all blows up, nicely done
Thank you so much
Now, that's dangerous... swimming in gasoline, nah, not a chance. Excellent write!
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