Girl of my dreams, you were once all the world to me,
even today you're the air that I breathe.
Though down to earth you were goddess-girl heavenly,
stilling the storm on the sea that did seethe.
Where are you now when the waves all wash over me?
Can you command as you did long ago?
Woman who loved me and always looked out for me.
Do you recall how I needed you so?
Love of my life, sweet soulmate’s sincerity,
you breathed on me like a warm summer breeze.
Blessed by your beauty, my brutal barbarity
bled by your throne as I fell to my knees.
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Author:
Blue-eyed Bolla (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: July 10th, 2025 01:13
- Comment from author about the poem: for my goddess girl
- Category: Love
- Views: 14
Comments3
A beautiful poem of praise and love, a tribute to a highly esteemed mate. Lovely
Many thanks, Soren. Glad you liked my poor little rhymes
Not poor by any means.
A lovely well expressed dedication to their special one, enjoyed the read
Thank you, PL. Much appreciated.
You are very welcome
Beautiful
Many thanks, Tony. I truly appreciate your feedback.
You're welcome
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