The Quiet Shape of Freedom

G.Cabús

Real freedom doesn’t shout.

It doesn’t demand the absence of limits.

It whispers—

softly—

in the hardest moments:

 

“You can choose differently.”

 

Even when it’s uncomfortable.

Even when the world expects otherwise.

 

Freedom

is not chaos,

not defiance

for the sake of noise.

 

It’s the courage to pause—

to listen,

truly,

to your own voice.

 

And then,

with trembling hands

and a heart still unsure,

 

to act from that place.

Not out of rebellion,

but out of truth.

 

Because dignity lives

in the quiet decisions.

In the sacred, silent acts

of being who you are

even

when it would be easier

not to be.

  • Author: G.Cabús (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 10th, 2025 16:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this piece not from a place of certainty, but from the silence I’ve had to face many times within myself. For me, freedom has never been loud. It’s been a soft, persistent invitation to stop betraying who I am, especially when no one’s watching. If this poem meets you somewhere along your path, I hope it reminds you that your truth is valid— even when spoken in a whisper.
  • Category: Reflection
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem gives good advice about being oneself. Nicely written

    • G.Cabús

      Thank you sincerely for reading. I wrote this piece from a very honest space in me. Sometimes, the most powerful advice is the kind we quietly needed to hear ourselves.
      Grateful for your presence and kindness.

    • Poetic Licence

      A lovely of having those moments in silence and the freedom to reflect and be oneself , enjoyed the read

      • G.Cabús

        I truly appreciate your words.
        You beautifully captured the exact feeling I hoped this piece would convey — the silent, inward freedom of simply being.
        I believe poetry sometimes holds what we don’t say aloud… and I’m grateful you felt that quiet space through the lines.
        Thank you for reading.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome



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