I am the silent one
The invisible eye
Cat like with
Measured breath
A lone killer
Finger on trigger.
Patient, frozen
Set to pounce
A killer
Legalised by war
Within my lens
Set to score.
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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Interesting characterisation of a fascinatingly macabre role. Poetic display of concise truth. Well done! Elizabeth
most kind, appreciated and thanking you
My pleasure. Have you worked in the military or is this more observational poetry?
observational
Thanks its very accurate well done
I love this one it takes me in several directions all held together by a single theme. My favorite lines (A killer legalized by war) Very nicely done
most kind, thanking you
Very well
Your poetry catches my eyes
very kind of you, appreciated and thanks
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