Morning Dew

Priya Tomar

Proudly dew sitting on leaf with thorn

Thinks, nobody so blessed has born

Questions on creeper's virginity

Fool chose lust over loyalty

 

Two came cloaked in innocent grace

One smiling with rays, second famed for fragrance

Tender dew had no clue, no sense

Lovingly touched and  erased existence 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very poetically written this poem in its brevity conveys feelings of human relationships their purity, innocence, desires, deception, broken bonds. So well conceived and portrayed in wonderful natural images. A definite fave

    • Priya Tomar

      Thanks for read and valuable feedback.

    • Poetic Licence

      Well that's a write of beauty, around the honesty, desires, deceptions, loyalty within human relationships, so well crafted a pleasure to read

    • Damaso

      Incredible story. It left me stunned and reflective. I enjoyed it from the beginning. Then, the final ending is tremendous; it splits me in half like a sword. I'm amazed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.

      • Priya Tomar

        Thank u so much
        Your words lighted up every corner of my head and heart

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what it couldn’t foresee. The dew, the thorn, the touch...it’s sensual and sorrowful in the same breath. A delicate, devastating piece. 🌹👏 Well done, friend.

      • Tony36

        BRAVO

      • RSM0812

        A very pretty poem about the soft touch of nature. Well done.

      • ElizabethMoroz

        Profound subject matter and so beautifully written Priya. The poetic sentiment of your language and delicate rhyming is so graceful and beautiful in this composition. Thankyou, its existential beauty personified. I love this piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth

        • Priya Tomar

          Thanks dear Elizabeth.
          Your kind words lighted up every corner of my head and heart .

          • ElizabethMoroz

            It’s my pleasure Priya, I’m so glad. You really have a gift . I look so forward to reading more of your work. Sincerely, Elizabeth

            • Priya Tomar

              I too ,very fond of your poetry

            • Teddy.15

              What a wonderful poem, rich in imagery visually and with such emotion. 🌹

            • jim56

              another lovely write well written poem
              keep writing jim

              • Priya Tomar

                Thank you so much

                • jim56

                  your welcome from one poet to another keep writing

                • NafisaSB

                  and so it is with human relationships too - trust is soon broken, and the innocence cruelly ripped apart
                  you have very beautifully and yet tenderly handled this piece of verse

                  • Priya Tomar

                    Thank you so much, Nafisa

                    • NafisaSB

                      always welcome. dear.
                      have a great day



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