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Kaz

Like the breeze I drift 

Sadness I can't outrun, hope 

Finds the rising sun 

  • Author: Kaz (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 16th, 2025 04:45
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem uses a manipulation of wording in the lines to conform to the haiku formula and convey its message which seems to be a progressive journey. with hope being the final line. Well done

    • Kaz

      Thank you for your feedback 😊

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome



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