To My Dream Queen

Priya Tomar

 My dream queen, my little lovely lass

Sleeping in deep flowers valley, soft green grass

Two springs' ve bloomed  your rosy buds 

A new lotus on this evil isle of muds

 

Open the doors of your dancing diamonds

Welcome the shining sibling with your hands

You ' re still sleeping , heralds came to you here 

See the painful partition of dew from petals there

 

Look at dawn preying the stars

Sing its bravery on guitar bars

Enjoy  nature' colours with witty eyes

Free the chained green wings into the sky

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Several most interesting metaphors here. This poem has a most eastern flavor to it in its settings colors and wording. It feels exotic. Most lovely

    • Priya Tomar

      Thank you very much , your words appreciated...
      You said Eastern flavour... In fact I belong to India ....🙂

      • sorenbarrett

        I would have guessed and you are most welcome

      • Poetic Licence

        This is beautifully written and has a very exotic flavour to the writing, full of colourful images and some lovely lines, really enjoyed the read

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Priya, there’s a sweet, ethereal beauty in this. It reads like a dream spoken softly into a spring morning...tender, hopeful, and quietly haunting. That image of dew parting from petals really worked well. Lovely work. 🌹👏

        • Priya Tomar

          Thank you so much .
          Always lovely comment , your words support me

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            You are most welcome! Glad out paths crossed!

          • Tony36

            Love it

            • Priya Tomar

              Thank you so much

              • Tony36

                You're welcome



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