So
you can sit there and reply when I talk to you
but not be honest
And tell the truth
then wander why I might get a bit upset
your telling me your one person
when I know your another
And your expecting me to believe you when you say certain things
well I don’t
so you carry on not admitting the truth
but I know the truth
so why keep telling me otherwise
what’s the point to not admit it
surely be better to admit it
rather than not
Maybe think about it
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I think it’s difficult to completely trust someone if you know someone is lying about Somethjng .. and how can you have a proper friendship with someone if they are sitting there lying
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truth is like looking at a painting… you see one thing the other sees another… let the truth strip the painting down to what it is, a painting
I’m not sure what you mean
But thanks for the comment
Dove, this reads like a real-time reckoning…no decoration, just straight to the bone. Your line...“what’s the point to not admit it”—says more than it seems to. Sometimes truth is the only kindness left. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
Thankyou )) maybe I’m expecting too much .. for him to admit the truth . He is being nice to me .. just got done reason isn’t telling me it’s him .. bit confusing . I can’t make someone tell the truth if they don’t want to ..
Thankyou very much for the kind words
Been struggling a little bit today with things
Sometimes a day just feels a bit ‘ rubbish ‘
You are most welcome.
"Been struggling a little bit today with things". Sorry to hear this, dear friend. I am keeping you in my prayers.
"Sometimes a day just feels a bit ‘ rubbish ‘". And how! Indeed, sometimes it does. Praying for a better day for you tomorrow, my friend.
Good advice in a poem nicely written
Thankyou ..
Yeah but sometimes people won’t tell the truth no matter how much you want them to ( or even if it upsets you ) that’s their problem tho
You are most welcome
It's never easy to relate to someone who blatantly lies. The only bright spot, if there is one, is that you see right through them. Good write!
Thankyou ! I can talk to this person and I do feel comfortable at times .. but yeah sometimes I feel bit uncomfortable when I feel they are lying
Thanks very much
Could you tell me that love lies to tell a greater truth? Show me your cards; I don't play with a dog's face. I could understand very well the situation it evokes, the exploding heart, the fiery blood. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
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