If you want witty wings
Then sit within word weavers' rings
First sing rhymes of ancient age
Then pluck virgin buds of spring days
Sing softly like morning breeze
Dance as wild as green trees
Behold beloved's breast with clever eyes
And gather pearls of blue sky
Enjoy colours of seven siblings
Steal rhythm from river tunings
Welcome winds of monsoon
Lotus blooming beneath the moon
Celebrate your witty wings
Follow all these wise things .........
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Author:
Priya Tomar (
Online) - Published: July 23rd, 2025 07:04
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Clever rhyme spiced with enough ambiguity to leave room for various interpretations and enough of the cryptic to engage the mind. A fave
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That is not only very entertaining but very cleverly done, leaving the reader to interpret as they wish, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
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Well done. Your poem revolves around creativity, self-expression, and the liberation that comes from embracing one's imagination. The poem encourages the reader to explore the beauty of language, nature, and life itself to attain a sense of freedom—symbolized by "witty wings
Thank you for reading and such a deep interpretation.
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cleverly done nice rhyming lines
steady flow nice use of words to
enhance poem nice to read well done
keep writing jim
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This to me reads like an ode to apprenticeship: earn your “witty wings” through devotion to sound, sight, and sensation, then let those wings carry you beyond every boundary you once called home. Delightful🙏🏻🕊️
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Most welcome Priya 🙏🏻🕊️
Such beautiful nature imagery. This is so authentically poetic and uplifting. I love the style structure themes content descriptions and poetic expression. Genuinely loved reading this piece. Well done! Elizabeth
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Such a pleasure!
Priya, what a playful and lifting poem. The line “pluck virgin buds of spring days” especially caught me…sensual and innocent in the same breath. You’ve woven a soft enchantment of a poem here. 🌹👏
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Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
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