lines, bottles, pipes,
you on my bed,
tangled in the sheets,
I swallowed what you fed.
perhaps if I had shame,
then I would've declined,
but when I killed myself
I didn't die.
angelic as a demon,
but I ran away with you.
everything's my fault,
the gun is clicking,
I'm still breathing, experiencing.
I'm so fucking through.
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- Published: July 23rd, 2025 10:52
- Category: Gothic
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Comments4
Lines that can be taken several ways and well composed
thanks
You are welcome
I got the feeling of a poisonous relationship that one side gave everything, now they have had enough, Nicely expressed and written
yep, and thank you
You are very welcome
BRAVO
thanks
You're welcome
Hayleigh, this is ferocious in its approach...and thatโs exactly why it lands. โWhen I killed myself I didnโt dieโ is brutal, haunting and unforgettable. Youโve carved pain cleanly into the page. Much respect, my friend. ๐น๐
thanks
You're welcome. ๐ค๐๐ฏ๏ธ๐ฆโโฌ
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