Guest on mother's chest

Priya Tomar

We all are guest

On the mother's chest

Why  poison you spread

All' ve right to bread

 

Autumn turns into  spring

Dark night into golden ring

Why you fear storm and showers

Cherish bloom and forget faded flowers

 

Time is not in our hand

We 're albhabets written on sand

We all are guest 

On the mother's chest

 

  

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Mother nature we are all a guest of hers. Nicely written.

  • Poetic Licence

    We are a guest and we should show alot more respect and love to Mother Nature, enjoyed the read

    • Priya Tomar

      Yes, we should love the mother.
      Thank you for this lovely comment.

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • Damaso

        Beautiful, it comforts me with a thought as wise as the earth itself and its healing herbs. Thank you so much for sharing it. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.

      • rebellion_in_sanity

        Perhaps the best gift of mother nature is the Mother Figure.

      • arqios

        The rhymes work excellently together with the words and their message. My current favourite of yoursπŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

        • Priya Tomar

          Thank you so much for this lovely comment, much appreciated....

          • arqios

            Most welcome and thank you for your lovely comments as well. Their value is inestimable. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Priya, this poem delivers. Simple words, but the metaphor/message carries weight. That line about alphabets on sand sticks for me. You’ve named something fragile, but still managed to hold it with care. Grateful you shared this. A fave. πŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

            • Priya Tomar

              Thank you so much
              Your lovely comment supports me, much appreciated

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                You are most welcome.

              • Jainesh.D

                Your poem beautifully reminds us that life is short and we’re all guests here. It calls for kindness, acceptance, and appreciating the good while letting go of the past. Simple and meaningful.

                • Priya Tomar

                  Thank you so much for reading.



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