What happened to your heart?
It used to be so strong.
When did these damn nights
get so fuckin long
You're my Lady of ashes,
and I'm all burnt up.
You threw me in the fire;
And my soul has had enough.
I've had enough...
I've had enough,
I've had enough
Yeah.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: July 24th, 2025 19:16
- Comment from author about the poem: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HwmDj1yF6LA Here is a link to my you tube channel where I just did a poetry reading at the Mason City Public Library. My books are available on Amazon.com www.thomaswcase.com
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Comments4
Feelings of abandonment in this poem. It gives a solitary feeling. Well done Thomas
I appreciate it.
You are welcome Thomas
Strong sense of being left and it hurt, nicely done
Thanks
You are very welcome
What a raw and scorched piece, Thomas. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you.
Your poem is dark and sad.
ty
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