Sometimes I think:
“God, help me,
I feel alone and I fear the world,
the life, the death.”
Then I look in to my brothers’ eyes
And I discover my same fears
and with them I can share the walk
to rejoice the impervious path of life.
I so wonder:
“Who are you God?
Are You our fears?
Are You our weakness?”
Blasphemer I think:
“We do have created You!
We certainly did
In our image and likeness!
Mirror of our uncertain minds
Comfort shelter
Cave in the storm
Nourishing Cow
Heather Sun!”
But if I think about Christ
Limbs nailed on the Cross
Two thousand years of bleeding sores
Best among Manhood
Example and Verb:
something that I can’t explain
touches me in the depth
of the ancient memory of life!
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Author:
Albix (
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- Published: July 25th, 2025 05:43
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Comments4
Nietzsche in a poem myths of man a wonderful write and well done from a first person perspective
Thank you for appreciating. I had Ludwig Feurbach in mind, when I wrote these verses. Nietzsche might have been influenced by Feurbach's thought.
A wonderful write, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
Thanks very much indeed PL.
You are very welcome
Love it
Thank you Tony!
You're welcome
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