The ancient memories of life

Albix

 

Sometimes  I think:

“God, help me,

I feel alone and I fear the world, 

the life, the death.”

 

Then I look in to my brothers’ eyes

And I discover my same fears

and with them I can share the walk

to rejoice the impervious path of life.

I so wonder:

“Who are you God?

Are You our fears?

Are You our weakness?”

Blasphemer I think:

“We do have created You!

We certainly did

In our image and likeness!

Mirror of our uncertain minds

Comfort shelter

Cave in the storm

Nourishing  Cow 

Heather Sun!”

But if I think about Christ

Limbs nailed  on the Cross

Two thousand years of bleeding sores

Best among Manhood

Example and Verb:

something that I can’t explain

touches  me in the depth

of the ancient memory of  life!

  • Author: Albix (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 25th, 2025 05:43
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  • sorenbarrett

    Nietzsche in a poem myths of man a wonderful write and well done from a first person perspective

    • Albix

      Thank you for appreciating. I had Ludwig Feurbach in mind, when I wrote these verses. Nietzsche might have been influenced by Feurbach's thought.

    • sorenbarrett

    • Poetic Licence

      A wonderful write, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read

      • Albix

        Thanks very much indeed PL.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Tony36

          Love it

          • Albix

            Thank you Tony!

            • Tony36

              You're welcome



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