Longing, longing—
solitude seeps through the cracks.
Pit-patter, it pools in my lap.
Let me cleanse your wounds with salt and grain;
the villagers watch, their eyes full of disdain.
I whisper, look, look away.
They do not understand my salt and grain.
They’ll knock on my door,
calling me witch, calling me cursed.
You’ll stand firm,
steady as rain,
not a flicker of doubt in your name.
But when you see—
the salt, the grain,
it was never yours.
It was always meant for me.
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- Published: July 25th, 2025 20:20
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Comments1
Salt and grain in an open wound is pain. A fun read with some meaning to it in that people always assume that everything is for them, good or bad. A most interesting write
Thank you very much, I think you understand my point very well.
You are welcome
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