My struggle travels, driven
sacral plexus of the explosion
constant rattling heard
I went against everyone for your message
Kerberos, guardian, fights the shadows
I chose to be feared and judged
sword stuck in the ground
pierces the satyr's head
without losing its sacred glow
I am guardian of our Relic
resides in the main pantheon
above, the thickest branch of the clan
usually protects from the infamous advance
my voracious gaze threatens your fear
like a blowing breeze, the last letter
from a castle perched on cowardly deceptions
bells on a sunny Sunday
guttural moans fly away
I promised before the black pilgrim
to steal from you again, a sprig of cedron.
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Author:
Pari4 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Story and confession of the cursed guardian of the sacred relics of the family.
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A darkened and quite intimidating character, choosing to be like that, born with a dark soul, on a lighter note it reminded me of when I was married!!, enjoyed the resd
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your words of encouragement! Best regards.
You are very welcome
A poem of darkness it casts its spell. Very nice
Well, I'm so glad you found it that way! Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your words of support. Best regards.
My pleasure
A dark and ominous figure, a guardian I would not want to encounter. Good write!
Wow, well, if you look at it like that, it sounds scary! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave your words of encouragement! Best regards.
What a dense and striking piece, my friend. The sacred and the savage pulse side by side here...mythic and defiant. I love it.. Truly, an excellent job, Damaso. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you very much for the words of so comforting support. It was not the best week, but you have to continue. As always an honor that you have lent your time to read a little and leave your support. Cordial greetings and good week!
Your poem explores themes of struggle, guardianship, and the interplay between fear and protection. It presents a narrative of a guardian figure, possibly representing a protector of cultural or spiritual relics, who confronts the challenges and fears associated with their role. The use of mythological references (e.g., Kerberos) and symbols (e.g., sword, relic) suggests a deeper commentary on personal and collective responsibility, the burdens of judgment and fear, and the complexity of loyalty and defiance. The poem hints at a journey that involves both internal and external battles, perhaps reflecting the conflicts faced by individuals who stand against societal norms for a greater cause.
Well I am very happy that my humble text has generated such an analysis display since I see that it has connected with it. You have described it in such a beautiful way that it made me excite. For others successful although I would call him an attempt to reflect. Thank you very much for taking the time to move to read and also leave his words of breath. Kind regards!
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