A message for Akhenaten:
Did you touch the blessing?
Were you the one to change?
Your words did strike a chord.
The world did rearrange.
Did David take your psalm, and sanctify your ways?
Total roundabout; pharonic antiphase.
I see a drama carved neath hyperbolic rays,
the smile of one who knows what makes a renegade.
I hope I hear correctly, the hymn from your short days -
another path, integrity,
(antithetical plays in
polytheistic days)
Royal was your vision, as sands were set ablaze,
for Aten carved your vissage, and paved your transverse ways.
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Author:
Eugene S. (Pseudonym) (
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Comments1
The Pharoah that thought that there should be only one god Ra the sun god just as there should be only one pharoah just as there should be only one right a wonderful poem
Thanks. Have been digging in to his story lately. Interesting character in many ways.
You are most welcome
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