Wake up I hate everything
Another day like this
Is this what you see
Do you really believe
I am just pretending
This is all I know
Take it for another day
Happy faces fade away
I shame myself
For everything I thought
Sifting through dirt
Finding nothing
You give no warning
Until this is done
Before we get up
Get away and run
Comments3
A sense of hopelessness a feeling of depression comes through in this poem. Nicely done
Yes I deal with depression. Ups and downs. Mostly down, been like this since I was 8. Trying to die so badly because I felt so sad all the time. Something triggers me and it jumps on my back again. Thank you for reading my poems. 🙂
You are most welcome
You can sense the feeling of helplessness, looking for a reason for it to be a good day but knowing already that it wont be, it will just be more of the same, very relatable write to me, nicely expressed and written
Depression is a difficult thing to deal with been coming out of a deep one now I know how difficult it is to live with that oppressive shadow just behind you. Take care and do the best you can its all anyone can in this life.
Thank you a lot.
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