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It's a new week.
New optimism.
New hope.
Will it last ?.
It's a new week.
New optimism.
New hope.
Will it last ?.
New Generation.
In the dark of another troubled life.
Tension and frustration boiled and came.
A new generation was deliberately born.
Changing all the rules of the game.
Tobani May 2025.
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Every generation speaks of how the next one is different, usually in a pejorative manner. This poem speaks of it changing the rules of the game. Nicely worded.
Thank you, I feel they have changed, the youngsters these days live and operate in a world that is so different to the one we grew up in, enjoy the rest of your day
You are most welcome. That is what my father said to me of his generation.
Let's hope this new generation has a better attitude than we give credit for because I see a generation of influencers myself, let's hope the game will.chamge for the better. Great theme. 🌹
Thank you, I am hoping I am being unfair to today's generation and that they gloriously prove me wrong, as you mention the influencers, I feel they are part of the reason the future doesnt look bright, anyway have fun in the sun
Situations change and generations adapt and are adopted by the new times.🕊️🙏🏻
Thank you, much appreciated
Well said, Tobani. They have to live in the world we borrowed from them.
Thank you Jerry, very much appreciated
Right....
Nice lines
Thank you Priya very much appreciated
You are most welcome.
We try. However, most of our efforts seem proven futile, despite all. Expertly rendered in striking brevity with superb imagery and a taunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you, enjoy the rest of your day
You likewise.
I've heard that if young and old stay in touch with each other, they can move more quickly and comfortably among their peers. And this communication shapes culture. I really enjoyed the article. Thank you for sharing it. Best regards.
Thank you, enjoy the rest of your day
Hello, Tobani,
Too, true what you have wrote here and well said. It's very hard to keep up with the changes and especially what people get away with these days. That being said, I still have my bicycle, an electric one at that, I must admit, apart from that, I'm a luddite, well nearly - hahaha!
Fond regards,
Tony.
Thank you Tony for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
In my opinion, everyone has the same feelings about the next generation or the generation before ours!
Probably true but today's generation is alot more dangerous, thank you for your feedback, it is always very much appreciated
Yes, there are! You're very welcome, my friend,
Tremendous work.
Thank you Thomas for your feedback, very much appreciated
A new generation for a new world
In my day we where never in the house
Some now hardly leave and have a virtual existence
I only hope they get as long a run as i did
Somehow I doubt it though
Thoroughly enjoyed the read
Thank you for your kind feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
As it does with every generation Tobani.
Andy
Thank you, have a wonderful weekend
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