So hot
You are
Turning ice into water
Setting my soul
On fire
My body
Going up in flames
From your love
Marry me
And
I'll disappear
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Author:
Anthony Hanible (
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Comments2
Clever a romantic poem with a surprise ending that fits too honestly into today's society and can be taken literally with separation, or just taking off or emotionally with distancing and withdrawal. Very nice a fave
Nicely written with a twist, is the end stated because the chase is over, enjoyed the read
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