Heard a story one day
And it blew me away
Would a family's faith stand the test
Single mother was broke
So when her daughter spoke
It would feel like a knife in her chest
Christmas loomed coming fast
So of course mother asked
My dear child what is your perfect gift
Can I please have a bike
There's this red one I like
It goes fast and has gears I can shift
Mother said we must pray
And they did every day
Mother had no more money to spend
Will you answer me please
She cried out on her knees
Or is this it have I reached the end
Christmas day had brought tears
Disappointment and fears
God ignored us so where can we go
It's ok said the kid
Cause I know what god did
He has heard us and then answered
No
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Author:
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- Published: July 31st, 2025 17:34
- Comment from author about the poem: We may not get the answers we want Does not mean we are not being heard
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Comments6
Nicely written, your poem explores themes of faith, hope, and the complexities of belief, particularly in the face of disappointment. It highlights the struggles of a single mother and her daughter during the holiday season, emphasizing the child's unwavering faith despite their difficult circumstances.
Thank you friendship
I truly appreciate such a review
Extremely grateful
Many thanks
A wonderful write exploring the struggles for a family at the festive time, but also tye strength of faith even though they didn't get what they wanted, nicely expressed and written
Nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read
You are very kind
It is truly appreciated
Many thanks
You are very welcome
If all were so wise. A good story indeed.
Aye mate
From the mouth of babes eh
Thank you very much for your time to read and comment
It is appreciated
Most welcome
Vivid and plain narrative poetry, the themes of daily life can truly touch people's hearts. Love it
Thank you very much justina
Appreciate the read very much
Delighted to discover your writing today
Much obliged
Very well written, I think he always hears our prayers but the answer isn't always 'yes'. Very good and glad to see you back writing my friend!!
Thank you Christina
All that is missing now is a write from you
Extremely grateful as always
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