No

peto

Heard a story one day

And it blew me away 

Would a family's faith stand the test

Single mother was broke

So when her daughter spoke 

It would feel like a knife in  her chest 

Christmas loomed coming fast 

So of course mother asked 

My dear child what is your perfect gift

Can I please have a bike 

There's this red one I like 

It goes fast and has gears I can shift 

Mother said we must pray

And they did every day 

Mother had no more money to spend 

Will you answer me please 

She cried out on her knees 

Or is this it have I reached the end

Christmas day had brought tears 

Disappointment and fears

God ignored us so where can we go 

It's ok said the kid

Cause I know what god did 

He has heard us and then answered 

No

 

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 31st, 2025 17:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: We may not get the answers we want Does not mean we are not being heard
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: Friendship
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  • Friendship

    Nicely written, your poem explores themes of faith, hope, and the complexities of belief, particularly in the face of disappointment. It highlights the struggles of a single mother and her daughter during the holiday season, emphasizing the child's unwavering faith despite their difficult circumstances.

    • peto

      Thank you friendship
      I truly appreciate such a review
      Extremely grateful
      Many thanks

    • Poetic Licence

      A wonderful write exploring the struggles for a family at the festive time, but also tye strength of faith even though they didn't get what they wanted, nicely expressed and written

    • Poetic Licence

      Nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read

      • peto

        You are very kind
        It is truly appreciated
        Many thanks

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • sorenbarrett

          If all were so wise. A good story indeed.

          • peto

            Aye mate
            From the mouth of babes eh
            Thank you very much for your time to read and comment
            It is appreciated

            • sorenbarrett

              Most welcome

            • Justina

              Vivid and plain narrative poetry, the themes of daily life can truly touch people's hearts. Love it

              • peto

                Thank you very much justina
                Appreciate the read very much

                Delighted to discover your writing today
                Much obliged

              • Christina8

                Very well written, I think he always hears our prayers but the answer isn't always 'yes'. Very good and glad to see you back writing my friend!!

                • peto

                  Thank you Christina
                  All that is missing now is a write from you
                  Extremely grateful as always



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