I was wrapped in luxury linen,
And placed in a velvet gift box,
With a bow on top of it,
I felt like the most precious thing.
I felt safe,
Held,
Adored.
But slowly, the velvet slipped away,
The soft linen was stripped,
The bow came undone,
It was only cardboard all along.
Now the box sits in a corner,
Dusty and forgotten,
And so do I.
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Author:
aneenaelzabinod (
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- Published: August 2nd, 2025 14:12
- Category: Sad
- Views: 19
- Users favorite of this poem: peto, sorenbarrett, Poetic Licence
Comments3
Magnificent writing
I won't analyse it til I paralyze it
Simply let you know I'm looking forward to reading more from you
A most wonderful metaphor that works so well. A fave
Simply to say this a beautiful write, enjoyed the read
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