The waterfall of tears she drops
Wreak havoc long before they stop
The sirens scream approaching cops
A wallflower in a dress
They bag and tag the hearts she stole
Enticed by dances on her pole
A death row stretch without parole
A wallflower in a dress
Less backbone than a jellyfish
Would never dare yet always wish
A sample for her petri dish
A wallflower in a dress
The darting eyes he found so sweet
Torpedoed his entire fleet
A bug that's crushed beneath her feet
A wallflower in a dress
With head held high she slowly Wades
Through champagne mixed with razor blades
Her heart dead set on future raids
The warrior princess
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peto (
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With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave. Well done
Many thanks soren
I truly appreciate your time to read and comment
You are most welcome
Sounds to me like a warning ⚠️ 🤣 fabulous imagery 🌹
TEDDY
Lovely to see you
Extremely grateful for your encouragement
Return the favour at least with a like sometimes. 🌹
Well written, my friend, a powerful poem. Your poem explores the duality of a woman's experience—her fragility contrasted with her strength. It portrays her as a "wallflower," suggesting she is often overlooked or underestimated, yet she possesses an inner resilience and a desire for agency. The recurring imagery of tears, battles, and transformation illustrates her journey through emotional turmoil and societal expectations.
I enjoyed reading this review
You go in depth and so far
Nail it
Appreciate your time
Many thanks
A lovely write, don't judge on appearance's, it can be a completely different person on the inside, enjoyed the read
Oh appearance can be deceptive no doubt
Thank you pl
You are very welcome
Look but no touch doesn't get you much. Rev the engine then let out the clutch. Not sure what that means but I enjoyed your poem.
A poem as a review
Many thanks my friend
This feme fatale hides behind the guise of a wallflower to lure her prey? How alluringly deceptive. You paint a picture with words that is quite stunning. Great Write!
Sharp as a tack as ever Bella
Thank you very much
Lovely to see you
Hello, peto,
A warrior in a wallflower dress, beware the facade in this splendid composition. Great poetry, rhyme, rhythm and theme; in all without a doubt. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
Hi Tony
Nice to meet you
Thank you very much for such inspiring words
Much appreciated
oh wow - what a strong lady - hope she inspires all the young girls to be a bit more intrepid - though the generation these days does not need much help in that department
Thank you nafisa
Apologies for late reply
most welcome - no need to apologize - i too had a hectic time - so can understand the reason
take care - have a good day
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