My desire for you
Like sparks on cotton
Has consumed my heart whole
I spend my days
Thinking of how bright
You made them
But the void left by your absence
Always lingers when you're gone
But the hope
Of falling into your embrace later
Keeps my burnt heart hopeful
For it is in your arms
That I find solace
After a tiring day
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Author:
Quinn\'sfav1 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 3rd, 2025 14:39
- Category: Love
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Beautiful imagery, i could see the slow motion burning of a cotton ball threads while reading the start of this poem!
Thanks. I'm glad you could see it
Great imagery for a love that continues to burn bright. Lovely
That's a Lovely write of a love still brightly burning, nicely expressed, enjoyed the read
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