Sol Poem, by not_defined, at My poetic side

For a moment, I felt peace

A delicate luxury gifted to me

And as I stared out the window

The world felt brighter

I'm diseased, I know

My head is often clouded

But for a brief moment

All was so clear

Its hard to see sometimes

When doubt fills the eyes

Then the fog lifted briefly

And the sun shined radiantly

I dont claim my negativity

But its mine reluctantly

So while it is here

I'll try to show it light

For that moment, I felt peace

One worth wanting for

And no matter how long

I'll find my way back again

For that fleeting peace

Made my world brighter

Comments +

Poetic Licence August 4th, 2025 01:14
Very relatable write, when those rare moment's happen amongst the chaos of the mind, we have to treasure them, nicely expressed and written
sorenbarrett August 4th, 2025 04:31
A beautiful poem that shows fleeting moments of brightness worth pursuing. Nicely worded this poem takes the reader on that journey.

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