Pre-dawn’s grey burden lapped at breast and knee,
As stroke on stroke I parted glassy deep,
To wash the burden-webs of sorrow free,
Where silent swells—that voyeur—my bare body keeps.
Then limbs grew light, as floating upon sleep,
I let the cool flood enter where heat hides,
Your fingers—wave on wave—caressed, discreet,
I flipped; twin peaks welcomed dawn’s crisp air, gasped, unbound.
On shore, new sun caressed my dripping skin,
When sudden grace—a butterfly, sapphire-dipped surprise—
Alighted, trembling, sipping lake’s sweetness in,
Where lake meets pulse—a moment’s nectar prize.
Then wings, whisper-thin, traced my temple’s hymn—
Hope warmed in gold; all old sorrows forever dim
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Author:
Gaia\'s Soothing Haven (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: August 4th, 2025 17:03
- Comment from author about the poem: The butterfly landed on my left arm. It felt like a small feather drawn across my arm. She finished, brushed my temple, and flew a few feet away. Seconds later she landed on my right shoulder. I waited for her to finish, and she flew, slowly away. My right shoulder flares up in pain when I have pushed it too hard, right where she kissed it. Whatever I was dreading that day, flew away with her. A Spenserian Sonnet.
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Mystical and sensuous a wonderful sonnet. Lovely
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