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Luke Bensing

Breaths discreet as feet

soft along the plush carpet floor

of the new home.

Floorboards underneath taut and young

nailed together so confidently.

Not given a chance to age gracefully.

These floors won’t creak and groan until we are long gone.

The bones old and achy.

Until then these sterile details clue us in.

The unknown reaches hidden therein,

The house could be part of a home

the home can never be part of the house

which stands in line, row upon row

shoulder to shoulder with all of it’s twins.

  • Author: Luke Bensing (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 8th, 2025 21:02
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    The shell does not equal what it contains. A lovely poem of something intangible.



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