If this world is the devil’s playground,
Then why is it a sin if I kill myself?
What better way to prove my allegiance to God than to slit my own throat,
And let myself bleed for what I believe in?
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Laguna (
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Clever inverted logic pervades this piece. A work that provokes a bit of thought written in a most cynical manner. Lovely
I enjoyed this cynical write, and I agree with the inverted like logic stated, nicely expressed and written
Interesting. It is the devils world but he wrote not the rules just how to break them. Nice simple write. Well done.
An excellent poem. Had to hit the fave.
Then the message never gets thru?
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