Blood in the Snow

𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱

there's blood in the snow,

and when you wake, you shall mourn

the rouge on my cheeks.

Author: 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 ( Offline)
Published: August 14th, 2025 07:37
Comment from author about the poem: just for fun
Category: Haiku
Views: 35
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sorenbarrett August 14th, 2025 07:55
A magnificent senryu that speaks to numerous interpretations. Good or bad the reader chooses
- 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱August 14th, 2025 09:16
  thank you for reading
- sorenbarrettAugust 14th, 2025 09:51
  You are most welcome
Fränz Müller August 14th, 2025 08:13
Love this!
- 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱August 14th, 2025 09:16
  I'm glad! thanks
Poetic Licence August 14th, 2025 08:31
Really enjoyed this, leaving us to decide if good or bad, nicely done
- 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱August 14th, 2025 09:16
  Thank you
- Poetic LicenceAugust 14th, 2025 10:41
  You are very welcome
Tristan Robert Lange August 14th, 2025 12:10
Love this Senryu, Hayleigh! I can feel the emotions in this and its brevity only helps them land strong. Open to many different interpretations. Brilliantly penned! 🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
- 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱August 14th, 2025 12:47
  thank you!
- Tristan Robert LangeAugust 14th, 2025 17:05
  You are most welcome!
Aradhya August 14th, 2025 13:15
what a spectacular piece, absolutely loved this! keep penning
- 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱August 14th, 2025 14:01
  thank you!
NafisaSB August 20th, 2025 01:25
trying to interpret - and hoping it's just for fun indeed...
- 𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱August 20th, 2025 10:23
  yes, haha.
- NafisaSBAugust 21st, 2025 00:37
  great - keep them coming..

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