Trying to cool my thoughts down with no ice,
He was holy, righteous, the mentality of nice,
Who opens those doors with the keys of Christ?
Jesus wasn't soft and didn't have any sort of vice,
Spread out all of the food, beans and bread with rice.
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Good write SM. Which one is Judas Iscariot the traitor? I counted 11 disciples. Has a bit been cut off the pic on the right - a hand with a white sleeve showing.
Haha I must have cut the traitor off lol.
I can't recall the original picture well enough.
A different view of an iconic figure where the metaphor of food is used as well as that of a last supper, Very nice
Thanks, much appreciated.
You are most welcome
Wonderful flow to this, my friend. Jesus sure was not soft. You didn't get crucified being soft in the Roman world. Reserved for traitors and the "worst" of criminals...meaning Jesus ticked some people in high places off with some not so soft words and actions. Spot on, mate!
Indeed, I don't think he looked like some hippy peace loving guy from the 60s either lol, cheers!
For sure. And definitely not blonde hair or blue eyes... 🤣 Cheers!
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