give me someone
who really matters,
who wants to be good for me,
who'll have my whole heart in one
and cherish every beat.
but he's mean,
and he hits me.
I thought it was a decoy,
he's not the man he seems,
he's just a boy.
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Someone who hasn't grown up yet and learned how to treat people properly, nicely expressed write
thank you
You are very welcome
The last line seals it. One that relies on violence is not mature or in this case a man but remains a boy. Boys do not belong in serious relationships. Well written a fave
my thoughts exactly. thank you!
My pleasure
Great job, Hayleigh! Boys seem to play "men" more oft' than not. Is anyone, other than themselves, fooled? Not I says...well...I. ðĪŠ Again, great poem, Hayleigh. A fave! ðđðĪððŊïļðĶââŽ
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