When hope has left
The day is long
Scattered sunlight
A cruel sun
When hope has vanished
Like littering snow
Melted gone
Winters glow.
When hope has departed
Unanswered prayers
Delivered upon knees
At Heavens stairs
When hope has died
A departed friend
Life is cold
Legs to bend
When hope disappears
Pounding brain
Like water slipping
Down a drain.
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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) (
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Comments2
This poem ends on a rather sad and hopeless note. It caries with it a sense of darkness. Nicely written
thanking you
You are most welcome
It is aterrible thing to loose hope. I liked this poem. It hit home. Nice write
most kind, thanking you
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