come closer,
Approach me to see
See how they locked our tears,
Banned all the cry outs,
Still there are men asking
“ Crying؟ why? Why you wish to cry?
What more do you women expect beside bread , meat, and rice?!
Anyway Joey s brother lost his wife,
Over some careless moves here and there, therefore and thus,
In nodding heads you would find 123 advice!!!
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Golnarmoininaminy (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
A poem that leaves me feeling that there is a very uneven power base here. Nicely written
An interesting write, a sense sense of woman expecting to be happy regardless of what happens, nicely expressed
Hello, Standbypoet,
Of those men who know nothing of love, the needs of the feminine, their wealth of knowledge, their poetry of the heart and their beauty of the mind. More than just to be provided for but to be inspired and above all, to be respected and lionised for all that they give and have given to the beauty of life.. Your way with words is to be greatly admired , so, too, this poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
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