Love often deceives,
Like the shining sundews.
Fades like rainbow dews.
- Salvia.S
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Very true...
A fave !
Thank you very much for the read, feedback and the fave!!!!
You are most welcome !
Very wise for one so young, this poem expresses wisdom in poetic beauty. It paints a picture of illusion that with time becomes seen as a mirage that fades. Very nice Salvia a fave
Thank you so much for the kind words!!! Thanks for the read and fave as well!!
You are most welcome
Wow! This haiku-like poem is brilliant, dearest Salvia. It is a simple yet deeply profound metaphor that rings very true, when it comes to humans and the "love" they often give then take away. Powerful! 🌹🌹🌹🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Great picture too!
Thank you so much Dearest Tittu for the read, feedback and the fave!!!
You are most welcome, dearest Salvia! I look forward to your work and it is always worth the wait!
A poem so delicate but edged: a warning distilled into three quick breaths. The sundew’s glitter hides its hunger, much like affection can mask intent, and the rainbow’s beauty slips away even as you reach for it. It’s a reminder that not all shimmer is meant to be held, and not every glow stays long enough to warm.
Your interpretation is spot on!!! Thank you so much for the read, feedback and the fave!!!
yes, sometimes if you are not the favored lucky one - this is what happens for sure
short, sweet and effective verse
You're right. Thank you very much.
Always welcome dear 🙏🏼take care 💐
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