Rewriting the Tale

Ray Moonee

In a dark jungle,
Covered by a frosty spell,
A glittering moon was playing
Between the howls.

A little girl
Sat listening to a fairy tale.
Like all the others,
She turned to her mother and asked:

“Can I become a witch
Instead of a princess in the story?”

Her astounded mother asked,
“Why?”

She replied, in a soft voice:
“I want to be the hero of my tale—
The weaver of my own destiny’s thread.”

Rather than a princess
Waiting for a prince,
Who needs a pair of crystals
To recognise me.”

— Ray Moonee

  • Author: Ray Moonee (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 23rd, 2025 07:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is written by Ray Moonee to break age old stereotype towards freedom and choice.
  • Category: Children
  • Views: 11
  • Users favorite of this poem: Priya Tomar
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  • Priya Tomar

    Wow !
    Evocative , lyrical poem

  • sorenbarrett

    A beautiful message in this write it reflects a more modern view of choice and an antihero over the old hero view. Nicely done



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