When I look at you, I don’t just see a person—I see a perfect cloud, gentle and effortless, drifting in the vastness of my world. Your eyes are like calm skies, deep and endless, holding secrets only the heart can understand. Your lips, soft and inviting, carry the serenity of softly falling mist, making everything seem more beautiful just by your presence.
You carry a stillness that makes the universe pause, as if you were born to remind us all what true beauty means—delicate, timeless, and simply divine
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Author:
louiray (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is my way of capturing how I see him beyond just a person. He feels like something eternal, something bigger than life itself. When I look at him, it's not only about attraction, it's about peace, about finding comfort and beauty in his presence. He makes the world softer, lighter, and more meaningful, even when he doesn't realize it... This is my reminder that love can be gentle yet powerful, and sometimes the way we see someone becomes poetry in itself.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.
Thank uā”
You are most welcome
Welcome to MPS, louiray šļøšš»
thanks! š
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