i cant hear a word you say
sorry I'm not here today
knock on doors inside my brain
and all there's left to do is pray
you try to speak and try to tell
all i say is all is well
further down his mind he fell
further down my mind i fell
emotions that you think he hides
hidden by the voice of lies
but truth comes true though open eyes
they just don't exist inside
while i touch and while i feel
i analyze to see what's real
and so remove it from myself
but then the feeling cant be felt
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Mr,apocalapse (Pseudonym) (
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This one is a bit cryptic and got my mind rolling the mention of prayer and lies made it feel religious in some way but otherwise it seemed more psychological. Nicely done
first part
someone is trying to talk me an emotional level but its just not working all there is left to do is pray the message gets through
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seconded part
they try to speak again desperate attempt to get a something but all they get is the lies of "all is well"
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third part addressed to the person speaking
"you think that there is something to reach hidden behind the "all is well" but when moved beyond the ambition of yourself and you see it as what i am I'm not hiding anything there is nothing there to hide its true emptiness
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last part addressed to the person speaking
" while i feel , the feeling is lost behind a search for what the feeling means and to understand it it fully i cannot look at it with my bias . i need to see the feeling itself isolated from what ideas i may have. but after such isolation of emotions its not possible to reconnect to them and the feeling is lost to deaf ears and blind eyes
only to be understood but never to be truly felt.
sorry for the long read
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