The eyes met the sun
The lashes blinked a rainbow
The light dared a show
- Salvia.S
© Salvia.S
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Salvia.S 🌹 (
Offline) - Published: August 27th, 2025 07:54
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 12
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Damaso
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A most beautiful haiku or is it a senryu Salvia simply lovely
It is both like haiku and senryu by structure. Thank you for the read, and feedback!!
You are most welcome my friend
Ooh...published right after mine, I am not sure how I missed this, dearest Salvia! But wow! Fantastic! Haikus/Senryus are no joke and you pulled this off with gusto, my dear friend. A fave from me. It is profound in its brevity! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you dearest Tittu for the read,feedback and the fave!!! Much appreciated 👍
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