The Light Blushed and the Lashes Dreamed

Salvia.S

Eyes met the sun

The lashes blinked a rainbow

The light dared a show

- Salvia.S

Author: Salvia.S ( Offline)
Published: August 27th, 2025 07:54
Category: Haiku
Views: 24
Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Damaso, Soman Ragavan, Friendship

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sorenbarrett August 27th, 2025 09:01
A most beautiful haiku or is it a senryu Salvia simply lovely
- Salvia.SAugust 27th, 2025 09:12
  It is both like haiku and senryu by structure. Thank you for the read, and feedback!!
- sorenbarrettAugust 27th, 2025 09:13
  You are most welcome my friend
Tristan Robert Lange August 27th, 2025 20:42
Ooh...published right after mine, I am not sure how I missed this, dearest Salvia! But wow! Fantastic! Haikus/Senryus are no joke and you pulled this off with gusto, my dear friend. A fave from me. It is profound in its brevity! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛
- Salvia.SAugust 27th, 2025 20:45
  Thank you dearest Tittu for the read,feedback and the fave!!! Much appreciated 👍
NafisaSB September 14th, 2025 06:28
THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE SHORTEST AND MOST EXPRESSIVE POEMS I HAVE HAD THE PLEASURE OF READING
- Salvia.SSeptember 15th, 2025 06:57
  THANKS A LOT!!!! THIS MADE MY DAY!!!

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