They said, I was a fool to fall,
to fall in love completely.
‘It’s suicide to swoon and sigh
and say, “she smiles so sweetly.”’
I said, ‘she is my destiny,
a goddess-girl from heaven.
We both were born two days apart,
in nineteen sixty seven.’
They said, ‘the ocean’s full of fish,
like fruit that's ripe for picking.
First love’s a reckless, rash routine:
a habit, well worth kicking.’
‘It rises and it sets with her,’
I said, of sun that's shining.
‘Her soul’s the same as mine, you see;
a soul with silver lining!’
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Author:
Blue-eyed Bolla (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: August 27th, 2025 11:05
- Comment from author about the poem: for my first love, Lorraine
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Beautiful! That's all to be said
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