Notice of absence from Damaso
I miss you friends
I miss you friends
Children of clay and blood
of the war in the heavens
ashes of shadows
Born hurting
crawls with rage
the conflict will be
will continue to spit out their minds
abandoned in madness
a second later
Far from cowering
life continues to give life
blessed be the humility
that burns in silence.
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Author:
Pari4 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Horror show offers the doctrine of paralyzing shock, a lie is not true, life continues to give life while Enki y Enlil they discuss our destiny.
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Comments3
This reminds me of the story of Gilgamesh filtering through mythology into the Bible and to present. Wonderful poetic lines here loved it A fave
Hey, well, first you sent me to read, and now I see a lot I didn't know. That's great. I'm so glad you liked it. I wanted to find a contrast between natural opposing purposes. Thanks so much for stopping by. Cheers.
You are most welcome Damaso.
Nice! Bringing to life that story in a powerful poem🕊️🙏🏻
Wow, I'm so glad you see it that way. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your words of encouragement. Best regards.
The poem explores the themes of struggle, resilience, and the cycle of life amidst chaos and conflict. It reflects on the nature of existence, particularly in the face of warfare and the emotional turmoil it brings.
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